How to write memoir without saying" then I did this" or "then this happened" dialogue...
When I read back what I've written so far, I want to scream! Its about expereince's I've had, a life story, but reads like "then this happened, and that happened... I hate it.What can do to make it interesting? More detailed information about each experience..Example:Then I went up to the Whiskey and ran into so and so. We went to he's house, got naked, and made love in the swimming pool.... then the next day woke up wondering who this was I'd just had crazy sex with... and so went back…
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WHY WOULD READERS WANT TO READ MY BOOK BURT RICHARDS CELEBRITY LETTERS
WHEN THEY DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT I HAVE DONE IN THE PAST 88 YEARS OF MY LIFE
I published, days ago, The Write Way- A Memoir Of The Muse And His Reluctant Channel. It revealed many secrets to me about life, direction, guidance, healing and truth. It's available on Amazon.
Deirdre Mullane of Mullane Literary (http://www.mullaneliterary.com/) has agreed to take a look at my book proposal plus sample chapter. She is a literary agent who sometimes helps authors make their book proposal shine before submitting. Fortunately, she is already familiar with my story and said she would be "delighted" to take a look. I'm coming in on the lengthy side at 53 pages before any sample chapters are added. I'll keep you all posted!
JD, I must say the review peeks my interest! But is the punctuation correct in the sentence "The first is in a cemetery..."? Maybe it's my eyes. Just looking out for you.
Makes sense to charge a nominal fee. From her response, it sounded like she wanted to review the entire manuscript and wouldn't be able to critique my book proposal. But, at least now we know!
JD, Fran charges $75 for the critique via snail mail. It's worth paying someone with credentials, I just don't have a solid idea if this is what I"m looking for.
Thank you! Even though my fingers are crossed, I don't expect to hit a grand slam on my first try. I'll keep you posted.
Thanks, JD! I've emailed Fran with my fingers crossed.